Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Wednesday, September 12, 2012

My Heart Is Dancing Like A Seal Comments

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Chill winds are blowing from the hill!
Will you be my sweet sleeping pill?
Without you God knows how I feel
Now it has become hard to kill
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Lopamudra Mishra 12 March 2018

Fantastic flow and emotions juxtaposed.

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Samithree Rajapaksha 25 September 2012

wow.. it has really nice flow. I love this poem.... superb..! !

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Life's blues. But thank God, there is an answer to the situation... only Jesus can cure and heal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2012

A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Anthony Han 12 September 2012

Very nicely put, reminds me of my own melancholy dread.10+

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Adeoye Adetoba 12 September 2012

Poem with a very smooth flow and rhyming pattern.

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Pink Pixie 12 September 2012

I like the way this poem flows, I could almost put myself in the author's place.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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