I lost everything,
That I had in my life.
Hopes disappeared
And Dreams faded away from me.
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Still reading this poem after left it months ago..and still loved it, always remind me a song My heart is broken by evanescence we both know what it means right! _Soul
Sadness kills us, but we should not be dead thinking about it....losing things you love may make you sad, but fighting for your right is your birthright. Fight with might that is your right. Good Poem, it was sad but nice
Did I never know my path? Or never did I choose the right one. But, what led me to break my heart? You question posed by poet to himself taking me in trance to the poetry of Robert Frost whom I admire with blood, sweat and food. I can compare these poetic lines to the frost poem 'The Road not Taken'. Nothing-else can be said. Good message yes people break our heart which is as transparent as mirror though we live without error like in terror movie. Great Effort and so A1 is the rating given by reader in me. Hot off to the poet......
Yes of course you should live and let live good piont, but even more: mend that broken heart and open it toward not only one but everything around. Have a good cry than Stand up and let your soul fly. Write your pain write your happiness and tell us of the things you see around. Good poem, thank you for share.
Solid and concise writing. Well expressed thoughts, and developed succinctly. Good poem. Peace.
I hope this renders ur heart the power to be indefatigable with the idea of break before it breaks once and forever what we all are destined with.
A pensive mood of the poet trying to find answers to failures in his life...hopeful to gain back everything. Strong spirit, good going! Keep it up!
Beautiful... Really too good to comment on.. An amazing poem.
Where you are now, I was many times before but with self-esteem and pride, I was able to get up as many times I needed to and moved on (Inner Strength) in my life! This amazing and powerful write clearly shows that great desire to break free and you have all the potential to do that: Wisdom, Strength and youth! But before you can achieve that ultimate goal you must reconcile your heart and mind since you are the architect of own destiny! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
' A question is always smilling at me' i have personally been there, and i thank you for sharing, welldone Brother
after being broken, you will emerge as a new one it is okay to be broken
Thank you for inviting, it sets my mind thinking. There are so many questions unanswered, answered but still we cannot accept them. I believe 'Everything in this world happens for some good'.
People who break hearts are often not worth fretting over, live and let live and own your own life. Touching write, extradinarily emotional.
Broken hearts are the results of meandering rivers in life.Every broken heart has a story.Rhythms of the flowing river only tells the one it knows.Very well written.
lovely meaning hope you read my too. cheers