Wednesday, August 26, 2009

**my Heart Is Bleeding** Comments

Rating: 2.4

My heart is bleeding
for the one who was leading,
now I'm just fleeing
coz I thought you heard my pleading.
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Saane Pahulu
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Chinedu Dike 23 December 2019

A heartfelt rendition elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful and very compassionate write. Thanks for sharing, Shane.

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Nathan Barkley 08 November 2009

i remember that feeling

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Black & White Right 26 August 2009

this poem..so sad..so familair..

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Saane Pahulu

Saane Pahulu

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