My Heart Is A Songless Bird Comments

wow... this one really touches me. It's how I feel about posting all my poems here.

I agree with everything said here. It is certainly the best of your poems. I really love the image about the mirrors only reflecting the past...and searching through the trash. That's such clear image of what we do when we cling to the past...i.e. take our garbage with us. Good work. Raynette

Oh my....you really got me deep inside Uriah. I felt this one.

Nice work, buddy. You're hitting the deeper parts; don't stop. Keep hitting them; mix it up, think outside of the box.

Uriah! This is a really good poem. I love the lines about the bouquet. Great stff!