Thursday, January 26, 2012

My Heart Hurts Comments

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It hurts so much my shoulder blades ache
I'm so empty that my stomach growls

It hurts, my heart hurts
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2016

Bring back the light that fuels my soul come back to where you belong back inside my heart your home.... bring me back to my home, where there is no negativity and my soul and my mind and my intellect is free...... thank you very much dear poet. tony

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Nafis Shadhin 08 September 2015

Good. poem. Nice to read.

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Patti Masterman 01 February 2012

This poem physically hurts reading it- everyone has had a heart ache at some time in their lives. The last verse says it poignantly and with true class.

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Elena Sandu 27 January 2012

Good poem! My interpretation: Inside of the heart, deep thing to build a house ~ nothing but love, I feel. Taken away nothing to keep, but pain.. Inspiring write, thank you for share,10

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