Tuesday, December 1, 2009

My Heart Got Hurt Comments

Rating: 5.0

I got lost in an embrace and adrenaline of being thrust in love
A love so great that goes beyond reality as so it seemed
I got lost in a promise that seemed so truthful at the time
It was like a hurricane so wild, it swallowed me whole
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Callie Shaw
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C. P. Sharma 21 March 2010

I know though spring may alter my common sense I am the only person who I can trust and be with forever These lines capture the essence of true love. I appreciate your poetic skill. Keep it up. CP

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 04 January 2010

A good one.. would like to see some more of you :)

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Shekhar Joshi 26 December 2009

Now this was EXCELLENT, u got me sucked in your poem(hoping it to be fictional) Sad but enthralling U got me bowled over this time Loved ur writing skills Readers are totally sucked in this one U ABSOLUTELY ROCK \m/ (keep doing so)

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