Friday, September 28, 2012

My Heart Does Purr Comments

Rating: 4.5

my heart does purr
for visions of grandeur that's for sure
i have a need, for speed,
and the action, is my main attraction
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Douglas Alan Stromback
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2017

i have a need, for speed, and the action, is my main attraction in my soul is I like passion i try to forgivee, my heart does sing i did it at the end.. so many points did i try to get from your valuable and rich poem with rhymin words at the end……… thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

An impressive one. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 January 2016

nd it gets my mind zooming on its racetrack i like passion it is my fashion i like to feel the escalated heartbeat. Realities of a young life, likes and dislikes, experiences of life. all described very well in this poem. thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 12 September 2015

A strongly written poem, Douglas. Thanks

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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

Very enthusiastic and energetic poem, pretty much in line with what I like, speed, falling, loud music, all the worthwhile and free things in this life. Adrenaline rush, nothing quite as exciting as it in life! Your poem raced through my mind while leaving lots of mind candy to savor for later. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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