Monday, October 10, 2011

My Heart Crashed With The Loudest Din Comments

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My heart crashed with the loudest din,
Loving you is the greatest sin,
Because the wages of it is my death,
You made my soul leave the earth,
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Isunge Mwangase
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Lenore Lee 12 October 2011

This has a good rhythm and truth: lovers only care that their loved one is happy, their own happiness is second to their lover's.

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Vipins Puthooran 12 October 2011

Wow, I like the rhyme and flow of this poem, , , written so well and it's a great poem...

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I think this is a beautiful piece of poetry! !

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