My Heart Bleeds! Comments

Love the second stanza I thought it brilliant

Intoxicated by the thoughts of our reunion, my soul burning to attain the salvation....appreciated this beat of naïve, pure, pious and candid poetic expression. This poignant poem has fathomless spiritual depth....appreciated!

aewsome..... best lines to me...Love wrapped around my heart... .... Intoxicated by the thoughts of reunion..... 10.

No match for this cry and plea as Nosheen said this poem deals with supernatural things with a sufism touch.100+++

what a tearful sentiment you have created in your classic poem in quest of your beloved.......impressive verses..liked it...full 10 marks to you..

The touch of Sufism in this poem makes it such a beautiful read. You have expressed yourself in lovely poetic language. Your choice of words is always impressive. My agonizing cries envelope this universe... loved every line of it.10 deservedly.

Oh! You will surely find your true beloved in life and, to attain salvation. Nice piece of work.

The poet has beautifully expressed the man's intense desire to meet that ultimate beloved. My heart bleeds in search of my beloved, My agonizing cries envelope this universe. Afflicted, I beseech my existence.