My Heart Beats A-Z Letters (First Tanka) Comments

Wow. Wonderful write..Just loved reading them all.

Thanks to Shazia Batool, Heather Wilkins, Abdul Wahab ji for their insightful comments.

this is very fine Harindhar, nicely penned..your new attempt...lovely enjoyed especially the first one!

a good series of the tanka form. well written

Hyperbolic images are blended with passion, rather than being highlighted as an extra thing...form and theme both well worked out! ! !