Monday, September 3, 2007

My Heart Beat Comments

Rating: 5.0

If i could hold back the time
And Reverse it all over again
I would make you Stay
for more than just a while.
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Mary Wismer
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CU2urDream Lost 10 September 2007

If i could hold back the time.....what else i could say than will done!

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Patrice James 07 September 2007

Wow, thats very deep love....very touchable...smile and keep the good work. James

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Rommel Filoteo 06 September 2007

such a sweet poem, i cant deeply feel all the contents. every line & every word touch my inner soul...

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Muhammad Hesham 03 September 2007

Written with such warmth, trueness, clarity, and purity, the poem deeply touches both loving and lonely hearts.

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