Tuesday, December 18, 2012

My Heart And I. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was young I wanted my heart to beat faster,
Run as the horses, leap as the monkeys and kangaroos,
Jump as the frogs, dance as the peacock showing the feathers,
Be nomad as clouds to travel and discharge as I liked,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Savita Tyagi 26 December 2012

Life never stops revealing it self. Hope you will keep catching its glimpses and will keep writing them. Its a pleasure to read your poems.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 December 2012

I like it...the contrast, the stark truth that's always realized late in life.10.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 December 2012

A good dig at the drunkards and smokers ! Let them read this lovely write and reform themselves.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 December 2012

A superb poem giving a dig to the drunkards and smokers teaching them subtly how it is harmful to the heart.

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