Thursday, August 25, 2016

My Heart Comments

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My heart like an innocent child aspires
To be in your company it always desires
Like a deity it takes you and it admires
When it is out of your company expires
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Yasmin Khan 25 August 2016

deep and sentimental

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 August 2016

it is quite surprising while reading the last stanza, as the change of the climax..well done and enjoyed the spirit of writing..

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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