Saturday, February 21, 2015

My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can't you leave me alone in the moonlit night?
My brain, for the whole of month, like a slave,
I moved in your hot and bright sunlight,
Please for a few hours let me live as a knave.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mj Lemon 28 February 2015

This is an exceptional work...a soul at one with the maker of the universe. Wonderful. A 10.

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Khalid Saifullah 21 February 2015

A beautiful and meaningful poem..............10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

A bud is twisting her soft pink petals, A flower is about to blossom in the night, Moonlight can melt the human metals, You like solids with a polish too bright..........yes, moonlight can melt the human metal. Very nicely it has been composed.A beautiful and meaningful poem. Many thanks dear sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

A bud is twisting her soft pink petals, A flower is about to blossom in the night, Moonlight can melt the human metals, You like solids with a polish too bright..........yes, moonlight can melt the human metal. Very nicely it has been composed.A beautiful and meaningful poem. Many thanks dear sir.

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