Sunday, August 31, 2014

My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

'My heart
Is numbing
And in distress...
As I chain this night
...
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Very good poem, a resignation of sorts lies beneath the words, in the line: Who am I for you to take notice. Kind of pulls at my heart to feel your distress. Great expression of your true thoughts, I love it. I give it a 10. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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