My Heart Comments
“I was amused to read few lines”
I always presented it with sublime
Simple touch of grief and pain was always there
I cried many times after reading it here
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Alpa Suba Good morning about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
Good Ansilla B2 hours ago I like the rhythm of it and especially liked the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing! Comment 0
Very good Tracy Bollinger2 hours ago Responding from the heart is superior to responding from the intellect is the the message I got from this. This was very spiritual to me. Comment 0 ... Dean Berger2 hours ago ... Comment +1 Tried, but failed
Stephen ePrivate2 hours ago This poems has lines that are poorly constructed, even for a poem. I am not sure what you were trying to achieve, but you seem to have been trying to use poetic license on the sentence structure, before you had learnt how to construct more simple poems. You must walk before you run. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh Mehta2 hours ago jump to no conclusion that shall add only confusion understand the real heart you may certainly witness the art
Good Ansilla B5 minutes ago I like the rhythm of it and especially liked the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing!
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“I was amused to read few lines” I always presented it with sublime
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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about an hour ago · Unlike · 1