Thursday, October 24, 2013

My Heart............ Comments

Rating: 4.9

Oft my heart like a bird
Wants to fly to lands unknown
And to sing songs yet unheard
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Yasmin Khan
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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Your heart is fabulous, desires are un-parallel and your expressions in this poem is unmatched.....Loved it..100 on 10.

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2013

the heart encounters many emotions and changes. nicely written.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 November 2013

Moods of the heart nicely captured in a beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Valsa George 02 November 2013

How the heart swings between the craving for colour, movement and action and a longing for quiet solitude! Beautiful images. Enjoyed much! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 November 2013

so sweet! ! simple and beautiful poem on nature.loved it.

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Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

Our heart does need a nest to rest... loving is never tiresome but enthuse much challenges!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Aha u draw the analogy n similes in a sublime brill way here! Kudos! And fondest regards.

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David Wood 26 October 2013

Another lovely poem from your pen, delightful.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 26 October 2013

Feelings of a heart beautifully expressed...10 definitely!

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Marvin Brato 24 October 2013

Heart beats in love wherever it stays... it is the essence of living!

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Majid Zubedi 24 October 2013

wonderfully written. a perfect poem in every sense, and from every corner.

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Wahab Abdul 24 October 2013

dangerously beautiful. .i love it

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