Monday, September 30, 2013

My Heart Comments

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'He took my heart,
In the ocean of love and care
Gave it a pleasant bath
Adorned it with lovely everlasting flare
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Hira Akhtar
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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2014

You have unconsciously wrote that Almighty Allah has cleaned your heart because He liked your heart as His seat. a nice poem.

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Ramesh Rai 12 November 2013

a lovely emotional write. keep writing. will get the destination.

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Abhishek Mishra 03 October 2013

Beautiful and so sweet..keep writing such awesome poems: -)

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