Your wording 'Lying underneath-, ' 'I'll leave-, ' 'and in death-, ' all so well played. Very intense and controlled. Good imagery with the power to pull me in very quickly.
thanks for sharing
Michael
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Your wording 'Lying underneath-, ' 'I'll leave-, ' 'and in death-, ' all so well played. Very intense and controlled. Good imagery with the power to pull me in very quickly. thanks for sharing Michael