Saturday, May 16, 2009

My Heart Comments

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my heart cries while my body dies
without her i break into pieces,
my heart is is like a target
i try to guard it but all i get is a hard hit
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Adrianna Rorie
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Jewel Workman 09 November 2009

its all gud and u know it u gud at heart and love wise

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! l0v3 2 g3t l@! d 27 May 2009

baby i have admited to the pain i caused u lot of time and i apologized 4 it too but i love u and im trying. am i getting anybetter at all? ? ?

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Sid John Gardner. 16 May 2009

Losing love is heart rending.Discovering it again is wonderful...Even with the sanme person.Nice poem Adrianne, , ...Just a bit of advice.Check out yor editing before posting.Good content. Sid.

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Adrianna Rorie

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