Friday, June 12, 2009

My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

if only you could read my heart
youd see the pain inside
its not a nice place
really cold and dark
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Lynn Marie
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I Am Charlie 12 June 2009

and it feels so dead, doesn't it? nice flow of words. though i'd think the to in the 2nd and 3rd last is spelt too?

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