Monday, March 23, 2009

My Heart Comments

Rating: 3.8

Mysterious, opaque, uncaring,
Darkness
Shadowing all emotion
Within obscurity; it is trapped
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Alex Rios 02 June 2009

Wow.... I'm speechless.... It's amazing! -Alex

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Stephen Black 23 March 2009

Just as your 'The Universe' poem, short with so much meaning behind it. And one stanza! ! ! I can't believe that there is so much meanings behind one stanza! ! !

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Alex Gomez

Alex Gomez

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