Wednesday, September 3, 2008

My Heart Comments

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My Heart,
Curled up
Next to yours.
Longing to hear,
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Junepaulette GasrelTibbetts
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Roy Gotaas 11 October 2008

Yes! It WAS like that.... just once in my whole life. Sleepy, relaxed fingers trailed across my chest. The tenderness and the child-likeness in between the passion..... it was heaven. Does it ever come twice in one person's life... can it?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 September 2008

that happens to happen as we trudge the path of life , dreams seems to be peeled off from the skin and at time, life seems to be hard time changes with newness even far away from dream, yet yarning for lovedances within, quite passionate write, well penned,10+, thasnks for sharing

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Very beautiful.Hi Sis and welcome....

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James B. Earley 09 September 2008

You passionately write of a path well-trodden....a journey romance takes us...often in total darkness....without a single light...to guide the way! Excellent composition.

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