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I've been here so many times Ernestine, I can never settle until I've finished a poem. Great write. Love, Andrew xx

I know nothing about child-birth, but this sounds like a poem-birth. Exquisite style. Ten. A favourite.

Nice one Ernestine know that 'Whirring' feeling especially after a few Glenlivets.Sid John xx

Dear Ernestine Yet another piece of inspiration to aspire to. Many Thanks Hope You Don't Mind If I Use Idea For Next One. Much Love Duncan

This is so true when writing or even trying to write....nice!

I don't know if there is anything more insane than writing poetry, but you describe it well.

This sounds like the various stages of a birth and its possible complications. Nicely done, sound very real. Best H

Well, I can't answer the 'Sane' part but........you're a wonderful poet. Sincerely, Mary