My Haunting Dreams Comments

Reminding me of a forgotten past, During which I stained my hands with empty love... Fantastic lines! The haunting memories.. wow grand read.

Lesa you are truly a poet but I think you should be writng in a song format. All I have read of you is very similar to that style why dont you try it listen to some songs to see how they are structured then write a chorus, and build your poem around that. I honestly think it would be great for the sort of writing you are doing. Keep creating your very good. Seamus

Lesa, unfortunately the past always finds a way into the present, if by no other means but by our thoughts. Really good poem... well done! ! Brian

Funny, how the memories pop in when least expected, unbidden, unininvited, unwelcomed, but there nontheless.