Tuesday, May 24, 2016

My Hard Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

For years, I have been mocked. Shot apon everyday.
Means things said, and in everyway.
Since I was young, that has been my life.
Full of everything with pain and strife.
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Victoria Hudson
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2016

Life is full of pain and strife but we hope to revive soon in happiness. Wonderful drafting shared.10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 May 2016

A beautifully crafted motivational poem that is inspirational too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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