Monday, July 26, 2021

My Happyness Comments

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Her smile mesmerizes my inner being,
Her eyes leave me feeling as light as a feather,
Her warm caress calms my volcanic energy smoothing my vivaciousness
Her gentle rub assets my inner security of the universe
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Shelton Chiuswa
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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2021

My personal note here: Happyness is grammatically incorrect and the actual word that should be used in Professional culture. is Happiness- Thank you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2021

Touching poem and serious love, since you think with your heart, very nice song in this poem about love. Great write! Thank you for sharing!

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