Monday, December 14, 2009

My Happy Ness Comments

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Urshula Davis 09 July 2011

This is soo nice! ! i love it simple and plain!

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Romeo Della Valle 29 June 2011

Smiling is one of the secrets of happiness and you described very well in this excellent, well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! Hoping you can read and enjoy my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS whenever time permits. Love and Peace for always! ..

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Dillon Gay 20 July 2010

Yeah, this reminds me of a couple people I've had in my life. Awwww......I miss them now......: (Oh, but great poem!

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Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010

i likes this \^-^/ it made the sun shine through dark clouds in my mind :)

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Ken E Hall 16 January 2010

I'm late for a very important date...however your poem held me it is original only you seem to hide behind words I think you need an i in happiness metaphoricregardsy++++10 regards

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John Knight 14 December 2009

Hi Angel - This is much better glad I made you smile again Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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