My Happy Homeland Comments

A poem written with deep feeling. It says so much even in few lines.............

I enjoyed reading this poem, although it seemed to be about a country that has lost its direction and disintergrated a once happy community. Maybe this could be any country. The price of progress. Excellent read.10/10.

The song image Of my homeland Shaking for so long Dissolves alone In thousands of splinters And each and every one of us Carries one of them in its soul sure homeland the swetest thing in life..the people who are out of their countries know whats the value of homeland..because when we get birth on our one land..the land becomes our mama like..its a sweet poem and reality baesd...10/10

wonderful poem, well penned with deep thoughts, keep writing........10