Wednesday, February 20, 2019

My Happiness ~ Moja Sreća Comments

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Take a mirror and look at yourself
So this is my happiness:
Your typed letter
An unmistakably placed comma
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 March 2019

Happiness must be given freely. It should not be demanded. A thought provoking poem cleverly written.

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Jankovic Zoran 12 March 2019

It was almost six years ago. Today, they are just memories of the beautiful. Thank you.

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

Take a mirror and look at yourself So this is my happiness: Your typed letter An unmistakably placed comma And the last sentence It is a surprise with a point...fine expression..from a poetic heart

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 February 2019

This is a great poem on self-projection! On the other side, one's calligraphy can reveal unconscious details about one's state of mind at the moment of writing. I have an example in my poem, " Letter to Nathan" .

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