Friday, September 4, 2020

My Happiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I ran once to seize the time
I forgot that it's unable to seize the time lazily

Once I ran after to catch-
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Valsa George 11 September 2020

A lovely poem....! When we do the right thing at the right time, all that we desire will automatically come to us. As soon as you set up a garden, butterflies began flitting around, birds started chirping on tree tops and above all the girl you love comes to gather flowers. Well done friend! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2020

It reminded me a posted posted POTD Plant a tree. For every problem plant a tree and see your problem is resolved. Just kidding, Nice poem Mahtab...10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 September 2020

Muse of her beauty! ! Glad in your heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2020

I find back my time........brilliant.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 04 September 2020

This is nice solution to plant the garden and enjoy the flower with butterfly sweet. Well composed and beautifully penned. Thank-you.

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