My Hand Comments

Simple and fascinating.A great piece of work.

Beautiful simply beautiful. A creative and heartwarming piece. Thanks for sharing such great write

A hand that always will protect you A hand that'll go through fire for you beautiful expression beautiful 10+++++++++++

its always good and great humanitarian hand - great poem

an offering with joy and sorrow nice 10+++

Faith verses fair is here composed in a creative and compelling composition!

A sincere offer with a fear that it may not be accepted. Feelings of fear and frustration nicely painted.

That is the risk we take in loving. Nice poem, Mario

When love becomes deep and true, for help the hand stretches from heart. It can be able to protect any one whom one loves. Beautiful poem nicely presented.

Such a heart-felt poem! Honesty throughout. And even greater honesty at the end! Very well written, Mario.

Simple and straightforward, I love the honest feelings, Mario. Tell me why you have 3 names, if you please and it's not too personal. :)

ANOTHER NEWEST NOTE: That poem is found back. Thank you all for your attention and the most for the Poet himself, Dankjewel, groetjes, Sylvia Frances Chan

This is a smartest poem, BUT few would be aware of it, sure, read the last line and THINK. Thank you so much for this most beautiful and meaningful poem of LIFE. With the very best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler. God´s Blessings in Abundance. NOTE: my comment for FORBIDDEN FRUIT was not placed, reason unknown. That was a very important response upon the poem, it looked like GOD did not wish that.

Your poems ae full of love, because they are dedicated and written with care about that YOU whom you love so much!

Wonderful hand that always comes up. Nicely presented poem.

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.