My Guitar. Comments

i don't know its good

good content, great idea, work on your spelling

This poem needs more internal symmetry. It has some, but it needs more. GW62

I like how everything flows really great together. It's very smooth and very poetic. I really like it.

It must b magical guitar than wow! Keep playing and writing good job...

I have always wanted to play a guitar. But all I was cut out to do was play the pots and pans in the kitchen! Have you heard me? LOL Good piece, says a lot!

simple and beautiful, it says so much.. I really like the way you express your thoughts.