Thursday, February 5, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

A tiny speck
It shines and twinkles
In the dark, immense sky.
The nomads in the desert,
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Lalay Allan
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beautiful...lots of feeling and voice! keep up the good work! -Layla

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ata khan 09 February 2009

beautifully written.10/10

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Ency Bearis 09 February 2009

a nice simile right..idolized and followed your love one...lovely..10

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