Sunday, June 22, 2025

My Guiding Light Comments

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Sweetened light I'm chasing through winds to see
Wishes of ends perfect inside ruby wheels
The dreaming of my heart grants as it steals
My future new flipped over on its heels
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Jacob Underwood
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 June 2025

A well expressed poem that provokes the mind. Yet, suicide must never be entertained in our thoughts. Great opening line.

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Timber Koleden 22 June 2025

Good rhyming! A thought provoking poem! Thank you for sharing!

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