Like a whisper among the clatter
Like a praise among the flatter
That is how you are to me
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A nice poetic imagination, nishtha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
I am sorry for I could chance to read your magnificent poem only now. It's really special in that such a wonderful poem has been penned by a very young girl.Keep it up.Try writing more.You've got great talents.I'm sure you'll rise to great heights as a poet.Thanks and very best wishes.
excellent! I am really amazed reading this poem. Its wonderful! ! :)
You definetly worth a praise.. Specially the feeling conveyed by the lines-'and never wish to be seen' indicating her selfless gestures, Nice
Nice dedication! ! Mother and daughter! Musing along with your poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.