Saturday, June 27, 2015

My Guardian Angel Comments

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Wherever I go, whatever I may do
I know that I'm close to you
In my heart flows so many tears
With the pain inside me through all these years
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Melissa Patty
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Daniel Brick 25 July 2015

I like your notion that your mother is your guardian angel. There's something so consoling about knowing that a dear departed one hovers nearby although in a different dimension. I truly believe there is one primary responsibility we have toward the dead: that we remember them, that we don't allow routine and time to make us forget them. This is what you are doing in this poem and it's why the star shines so brightly in the sky.

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Melissa Patty 25 July 2015

Awk thankyou, I do believe that she is constantly by my side no matter what! Yea it is. That is so true. She may be gone but she remains close to my heart and will cherish all the special memories I had With her. Can I just say that comment is sooo nice, really touched me, can't thankyou enough for your encourgment!

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