Monday, September 24, 2012

My Green Mile Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found god in my Great Grandmother's eyes
where only the truth lies
dreams come to reality
in a heavenly playing field
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Kelvin Owusu
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Nader Baheri 25 September 2012

beautiful short but so meaningful The contradiction beween the first stanza and the second where even in your grandmother's eyes you found the truth was lying. I agree with you.you will see her again by the way GOD BLESS Michael Clarke Duncan and you mucha gracias for sharing

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Stevie Taite 24 September 2012

Yes how would someone find comfort in that last walk.. How would one prepare themself, especially in their complete, helpless innocence.

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