Saturday, May 3, 2008

** My Greatest Love ** Comments

Rating: 4.4

I would swim across the ocean of burning coals
Hanging myself to the pole
Out casting and left freezing in the cold
Cracking my brain till numb and bold
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Ignoramus 22 December 2019

Unbelievable that's all I can say!

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

Quite delightfu....good job! ! !

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

Our love is seductively raw and rare Rachel Ann Butler

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Whisperkwane Lamb 10 August 2009

Cyrano de bergerac would have loved your poem...yes it has that kind of wisdom concerning love.

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wonderful poem..you have a beautiful way of expresssing your deep feelings..

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Bethany Williams 10 July 2009

Wow! I really love this poem. You are such a great writter.... Love your poems... I give you a 10... for the good writting.

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a passionated love poem filled by deep longing..well expressed..10++++

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 June 2009

Superlative love ('greatest') ...talks about experience. Ah, Casanova! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Kuji Soliman 26 April 2009

i loved it, thanks for sharing! ! ! you are truly talented

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Rage Allay 02 February 2009

Very good write. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

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Madison Yeater 15 December 2008

im like lost within this poem...its like our love.... us doing anything, through thick and thin just to find the love of each other.. very nice. i vote 10+ You&Me4ever<3

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Muthu Veerappan 07 December 2008

nice one... i really loved it... continue the good work...

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Yoelina Peralta 05 December 2008

nice work i liked it, like it flows right =]

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Ananiya Alick Ponje 18 November 2008

The emotions expressed in your poem are just too real to be discounted. It has that sort of breath that would make a sheet of glass wet.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 November 2008

I feel it's best if we read this poem while listen to Berlioz' symphonie fantastique.

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Mohammed Albalushi 16 November 2008

'My love you can’t tear' yes its Greatest Love

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 08 November 2008

Sulaiman - You have's such an open heart, it must pain you so.... but then there's also the sheer joy....here and gone..... gone then here! ! Cheryl

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Raj Nandy 25 September 2008

This poem will become really entertaining if put to music and sung! -Raj Nandy

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Koyel Mitra 07 September 2008

Excellent love poem.A full 10 for you.

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Absent Wryta 05 September 2008

A brilliant write and a pleasure to read

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