I would swim across the ocean of burning coals
Hanging myself to the pole
Out casting and left freezing in the cold
Cracking my brain till numb and bold
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Cyrano de bergerac would have loved your poem...yes it has that kind of wisdom concerning love.
wonderful poem..you have a beautiful way of expresssing your deep feelings..
Wow! I really love this poem. You are such a great writter.... Love your poems... I give you a 10... for the good writting.
a passionated love poem filled by deep longing..well expressed..10++++
Superlative love ('greatest') ...talks about experience. Ah, Casanova! ! Cheers. Subroto
im like lost within this poem...its like our love.... us doing anything, through thick and thin just to find the love of each other.. very nice. i vote 10+ You&Me4ever<3
nice one... i really loved it... continue the good work...
The emotions expressed in your poem are just too real to be discounted. It has that sort of breath that would make a sheet of glass wet.
I feel it's best if we read this poem while listen to Berlioz' symphonie fantastique.
Sulaiman - You have's such an open heart, it must pain you so.... but then there's also the sheer joy....here and gone..... gone then here! ! Cheryl
This poem will become really entertaining if put to music and sung! -Raj Nandy
Unbelievable that's all I can say!