Wednesday, October 10, 2018

My Grandson Amon Comments

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Who swam hither across unimaginable gulfs
To prove the fertile power of the abyss
And ease my fear of ends and beginnings?
What conception shaped this dolphin torso
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Denis Mair
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 21 November 2019

Congratulations! Amon's only language is love. That's wonderful. By the way, nous aimons in French means we love. I love being a grand-papa.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 21 June 2019

What a delight a child can be, bridging gulfs as you have described. And even more precious having overcome great improbability, as you say. He must be a busy toddler now. I hope you get to enjoy him often.

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Pamela Sinicrope 12 April 2019

This is a beautiful and spiritual poem...and life affirming and well written. Thanks for sharing Denis.

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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2018

Let me quote from the poem- - Who swam to me across such gulfs? Only a tentative sprout of life Yet prepared for so carefully And rooted so tenaciously He barges through my heart's door To say that life wants to renew itself And is willing to be at home with me

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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2018

Wow- - - - what a wonderful write and this cute picture of the baby ! ! He has swam unimaginable gulfs to prove the fertile power of the abyss- - -His only language is love- - -He is all about love- - - -His sweet grin remains in your heart, so that you carry the sweetness when you go outside.- - - - - This is an ablolutely beautiful poem about Lord's amazing power of creation - -and His lovely gift 'babe' who dazzles our life with his coming.

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