Tuesday, December 8, 2015

My Grandson Comments

Rating: 5.0

My grandson when you smile,
My heart beats for a while
The sky would come down with rain of joy
And hits the town, when you smile
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Dr. Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek Mohammed
COMMENTS
Valsa George 31 January 2016

A lovely poem showing how the arrival of a grand child has once more rekindled your life with new verve and enthusiasm. The grand parents' care and concern know no limits! They spring into action when he cries, do everything to make him smile and are ready to pluck down the moon for him. This poem, so free flowing carries the waves of warmth and tenderness!

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 31 January 2016

Thank you so much, Valsa for your comments.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 December 2015

suc a great wonderful imagination! ! ! ! your love for your grandson, your joy in his smile, your sadness when he cries.... it is all so finely portrayed in your poem. thank you. tony

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 08 December 2015

Thanks Dr. Tony. Your words do really make very happy.

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