Friday, April 8, 2022

My Grandparents Were Married 100 Years Ago Comments

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I can see your eyes
behind this veil.
But I cannot feel your gaze.
I can hear your words, but your breath
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T.R. James Bray
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Smoky Hoss 06 August 2022

Again, I find in the words of your amazing poetry a truth of such ordinary things, yet seen through the eyes of something beyond it all, a sense of the divine, a sense of touching eternity in the briefest of moments. Mesmerizing.

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Nate Tulay 11 April 2022

A truly beautiful poem... a well penned poem honoring the old age and love... and highlighting the death of politics and the new social contract that is destroying society...

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

Thanks Nate so nice of you to comment.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 April 2022

A beautiful tribute to your grandparents. And what a clever, intriguing and creative method as an indictment to modern technology. Perfect!

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

Thank you Richard, I appreciate the critique. I only wish I was able to match your creativity.

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A poem of love and remembrance. Liked it.

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

So nice of you to say poet friend.

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