My Grandchild Comments

lovelyyy/...10 on 10

I see you scattered everywhere, too far, too near, here and there...From starting lines this poem gives interesting thrill to understand about grandchild and affectionate grandfather like you. Again this is very philosophical regarding God and his universal creation. Very beautiful composition shared really.10

Beautiful poem....................!

Lovely poem with beautiful rhyming. Your love for your grandchild and your adoration for God who gifts you with everything you desire overflow in these lines! A sure 10

I am yet to be a grandfather, but I can understand your message

I got everything whatever I desired! It is the extent of our faith in the Supreme being that makes us accept all His gifts - big or small - with complete humility and gratitude. The poem bears ample proof of that submission. Thanks, Sir.

I see the moon but I can't kiss it, I love it's light and I can't miss it, I need the moon with its forehead milky, I need the clouds with the hairs so silky, beautiful lines with powerful poetic imagination, thanks for sharing, you are a great poet, i enjoy reading your poems