Wednesday, September 9, 2015

My Grandaughter Comments

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They lowered the babe into my lap;
Careful with her ties and snaps,
Her naked legs, startled, churning;
My eyes welled up, my throat was burnng.
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David McLansky
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Elaine Sept 24 January 2016

What a touching and tender moment. I so love the reality of this, as I feel I am watching the event unfold. Lovely that you have a new little one to devote your words upon! xo Elaine

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Myke Todd 16 September 2015

Wonderful poem, Sir... I have known this blessing, and it is one that renews daily.

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2015

A beautiful poem, David. Thank you for sharing

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Roseann Shawiak 10 September 2015

What a heart touching and lovely poem this is, David. Brought tears to my eyes, it was so beautiful! Granddaughters are very precious and loving throughout their lives, you will have many happy moments fulfilled when with her I am sure. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, RoseAnn

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David Mclansky 11 September 2015

Truly this was one of the happiest moments of my life.

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