Sunday, July 7, 2013

My Good Wife Comments

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A handsome woman
Walking up the road
Making a mercy visit
To a neighbors house;
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David McLansky
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Bri Edwards 17 July 2013

i have to search out my wife at night to give her a little kiss before i retire to bed. she is usually at computer. your wife/relationship sound(s) delightful. i hope it is. thanks for sharing, especially the rhymes and the lines: That my health will not implode That my soul not disappear In some minor cataclysmic event i have had four sometimes-good wives. the current one is STILL good.........well, good enough! great poem. it goes to my poemlist.

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