Friday, December 4, 2015

My Golden Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

My golden autumn, drippy time...
It cries like a woman that's not mine.
It lies me that I will find
my love in a rainy time.
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Almas Assylbekov
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 January 2016

My golden autumn, pensive time... Leaves die, but leave us for a while. I burn them, I erase your smile. My golden autumn, change my mind. golden autumn, love, and changing of the mind.... erasing your smile. emotions well expressed in fine verses. thank you tony

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Kelly Kurt 04 December 2015

An interesting style, Almas. Thanks

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Shakil Ahmed 04 December 2015

beautiful presentation of autumn, thanks for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

A glowing tribute to Autumn paid in a melodious verse form. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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