My Girlfriend Is Fat And All She Ever Talks About Is Fish Cadavers In Pies Comments

Lol. Quite humorous but handled with serious. Maybe, a typical of depicted levity. It's fun re-reading your piece, dear.

very interesting poem....... with a psychological hint about relationships and its problems. thank you dear poet. tony

You sound like a Wigan Pie Eater :)

I don't know about pie and mash but I do know about spelling and nations may rise and fall on this kind of spelling.

Nice and thought provoking