I could see her bright eyes,
dark brown irises blends
with her crown flowing through
behind her naked back
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beautiful..nice composition..your lover, your woman, your girl and your friend..all in one person..grace
Youthful love and it's sad loss. Have faith that if she really is yours she will be back. nicely written, but be mindful of some grammar miscues.
Gosh finish…and a very nice poetic twist Imageries are sparkling…enjoyed… Masterly penned… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK