Thursday, February 26, 2009

My Girl, My Woman, My Lover Comments

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I could see her bright eyes,
dark brown irises blends
with her crown flowing through
behind her naked back
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Noel Horlanda
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Gosh finish…and a very nice poetic twist Imageries are sparkling…enjoyed… Masterly penned… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Meggie Gultiano 06 August 2009

Beautiful flow of words..so well crafted. A great piece.

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Lady Grace 16 June 2009

beautiful..nice composition..your lover, your woman, your girl and your friend..all in one person..grace

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Eddie Roa 01 March 2009

Youthful love and it's sad loss. Have faith that if she really is yours she will be back. nicely written, but be mindful of some grammar miscues.

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Noel Horlanda

Noel Horlanda

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