Thursday, August 23, 2012

My Girl Friend Comments

Rating: 4.8

Her eyes are demure diamonds
Below the rainbows of eyebrows.

Her cheeks are twin rubies
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COMMENTS
Ketan Hukare 06 October 2012

Great words! Encore! Reading your poems makes my day!

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Grant Lovell 06 September 2012

Excellent! well-crafted! Have fun, till the end!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

super super 10+++

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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

Good rhyme and rhythm. Like it. Enjoy your girl friend.

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Eindaray Kyaw 24 August 2012

Your words are really sharp and deep enough to describe your girl friend's beauty! You know, the verseHer lip is the rosy wine That I sip with melody rhymes.makes me smile! Your poem is also melodious like your girl's body! !

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James Harrison 24 August 2012

It seems that the person in your life means a lot too you, she seems to be a amazing person and you enjoy being in her company, you gave great descriptive words in that we get a real picture of this person who you are in love with

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