Monday, June 26, 2006

My Gift To You Comments

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I gave you a flower-
It was all I could give.
I let you go,
'Cause you could not live.
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Lesa MRK
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Night Hawk 28 June 2006

This was excellent, so few words to express such great emotion, very well done

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Grace Hays 27 June 2006

Lesa, Another beautiful poem. I could see you standing there with a flower for him. I know he would be proud of what you have wrote for him. Always & 4ever, Grace

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Herbert Nehrlich1 26 June 2006

A sweet poem, unpretentious, not very original in subject matter but good nevertheless or inspite of it. Best H

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